[hoshi's 1st storia] "With You" (Chapters 5 - 7)

before anything else, (again?? xD) ... ... uhh...... nothing.. xDD jk.. no.. uhh.. i don't know if you'll be excited but i decided to have confessions post about the story after I've finished posting the whole story.. ;D haha! okay.. again.. enjoy.. :) oh, by the way, there's a reason why I didn't include chapter 8.. to be balanced.. I'll be posting it with the chapter 9 and 10 (which is a long chapter). Again, I say to you.. xDD this story is not professionally made.. :)

_______________________________________________________

 Chapter 5: A new home

The day continues here. Alice went out for school, very happy. Mira and the band was surprised to see plenty of food on the table that was cooked by Alice. Good thing, those food tastes like heaven. They all enjoyed it. Meanwhile, Matthew, as the oldest, started to make a schedule for the band with the help of Mark. That time was a little quiet for them so Paolo think of anything to do to remove his boredom. He called out Edward and Daniel. He went to Mira's room quietly. Good thing, Mira was sitting on her bed and was concentrated looking outside the window.

"UUUWWAAAHH!!" Paolo screamed, surprised Mira, wagging his rubber fish.

"Shi~!! Aaaaa!!!" Mira shouted and violently ran as Daniel and Edward laughed.

"Wualah! Gottcha! Peace!" Paolo said with a big silly smile on his face.
"Argh! You silly boy! Go back to your room! Haha!" Mira said, laughing at herself.
"Hah! You better run away from you grandma!" Daniel said and still, laughing.
"Nah! Who are you calling grandma!?" Mira asked, smiling.
"Obviously.." Edward said, lifting his eyebrows, looking at Mira.
"Argh!! I'll get you outah here!!" Mira shouted, smiled like a criminal, lifted her sippers and chased the three silly boys.

All stopped running. Tired and still laughing. They took a rest on the floor, grasping for oxygen.

"You can stay here as long as you want." Mira said, smiling. She stood up.
"Oh.. Thank you.. GRANDMA." Edward teased Mira, and put out his tongue.
"As long as you won't call me grandma. HUWAHAHA!" Mira said, stroked Edward's head gently.

Mira and the band decided to prepare a dinner together. They helped each other. Mira guided the others what to do.   They baked a choco caramel cake as a thanks for Alice. Alice came back home, she was surprised and thank everybody for the hard work. She heard Paolo called Mira as "mama". She was surprised. She smiled to Paolo and said, "Wow! Can I.. call you brother?" with hesitation and a little nervous that Paolo would reject.

"Why not?" Paolo replied.
"Add one to that!" Edward said.
"Call all of us you brother would be perfect!" Daniel said, and winked to Alice.
"Thanks, all!" Alice said, bowing her head.
"Group hug!" Edward shouted.

They all gathered themselves, came closer to each other and hugged.

"Steppers High!!??" Daniel shouted. The boys laughed.
"WOOOOOT!!" They all shouted, going back to their seats and continued eating the dinner.

_______________________________________________________

Chapter 6: Save Me...

Again, it's time for Alice to work. This time, the band followed her secretly. They want to know her situation at the work. They were a little close to the workplace when the boys got very thirsty so they bought first something to drink in a store just beside them except for Edward who was eager to see Alice so he leave the boys there and went straight ahead to Alice's workplace. He was almost there at the cafe's back door when he heard a loud bang of the door and a man screaming with a deep voice. He looked what's in there then saw Alice and her boss. Her boss pulled her out of the back door and slammed her against the wall. Alice got very scared, and was shaking. Tears burst out of her eyes.

"Didn't I told you to do your job?" The boss shouted.
"But.. I.. work here to.. to be a waitress.. w.. why do I have to do it!!?? I won't do that!" Alice nervously defended herself.
"You'll be dead!" the boss whispered to her, raising his fist.
"Stay away from Alice!!" Edward madly shouted, placing Alice behind him.
"Who in the hell are you, kid!?" the boss asked.
"Don't care about it anymore!" Edward said, and punched the boss' face on his full force.
"You! How dare you *f*ing kid do that!?" the boss shouted, raised his fist.
"IIYYAAHH!! EDWARD!!" shouted Alice and pulled Edward away to make the to make the boss' attack be missed.
"Oh! Thank you! Nice one!" Edward said to Alice.
"Errr! You almost been hurt! Stop it! Let's run away!" Alice pleaded to Edward.
"Stop! Edward! Alice! What's happening here!?" Matthew shouted. He ran and came close while the other band mates followed.
"Are you two okay!?" Daniel Said.
"You.... You're fired!" the boss shouted, pointed Alice and walked away.

Alice nodded to Daniel. She was still, shaking and trembling as if she was suffering from trauma. Edward walked Alice to a bench near the cafe. Paolo handed her a drink which he bought intentionally for her. Edward patted Alice's head, and Daniel patted her back gently. Mark handed her some tissue. Edward stood up.

"Who in the hell are you, kid!?" Edward said, cosplaying the boss.
"Edward! Why? you didn't know??" Edward said, being himself.
"You! How dare you *toot* kid do that!?" Edward said and again, cosplaying the boss.
"I can dare to! To my sister's freaking boss who looks like a big fat gorilla full of cooked mongo beans on his face!"he said, being himself.
"Hahahahaa!! Bravo, my brother!! Wonderful!" Alice said, smiling and was clapping her hands.
"You're such a bi-atch, Edward! Haha! joke!" Daniel pointed to Edward.
"Thank you.. Thank you! haha! kidding!" Edward said, bowing his head like there was a concert.

...

"Shall we go? It's already 11PM." Matthew asked.
"You can guys go home. I still need to freshen up myself." Alice replied
"I'll...." Edward accidentally said.
"Ha?" Matthew asked.
"You'll?" Mark said, waiting for the continuation.
"I'll go... yea, with Alice?? Is that ok?" Edward continued, looking at Alice.
"Ha? uhh.. Sure? Oh.. yea, sure!" Alice replied with a smile.
"Ah! I forgot! Matthew, Mark, Paolo, we need to do something, right Paolo?" Daniel said, sensing something and secretly winked to Paolo.
"Ah! Yes! The... The curtains!" Paolo shouted as he got Daniel's message and pulled Mark.
"Bye! Take care, both of you!" Matthew said as he can sense what Daniel and Paolo was doing.
"Thanks! You too!!" both Edward and Alice replied.

As the four boys walk away in the scenario, silence between Alice and Edward, came for a while.

"Let's walk in a park?" Edward said.
"Uhh... Sure?? Let's go!" Alice replied.

_______________________________________________________

Chapter 7: Tell me your story.

Alice and Edward then, walked on the park. They took a rest on the picnic grounds, feeling the cold air.

"Eiiyyaahh!! Haha! You're so quiet!" Edward said.
"Haha! I.. I can't think of anything to say.. or.. any topic to start with." Alice replied.
"Wuuuhh!!"
"What!? Eh! FINE! Tell me something about yourself."
"Me?"
"Obviously. haha!"
"My name.. is Edward. My.. little brother's name is Paolo.."
"uhuh.. yes, i'm listening.. then??.."
"The end!" Edward shouted, pulled some grass and made it his confetti.
"EEHH!!! YOU'RE SO!" Alice shouted, stroked Edward's head.
"OUCH! That hurts! Why!? I did nothing against you! This is.... in... in... injustice!"
"Haha! Crazy! I mean.. something about yourself! your life.."
"Ha? uhh.. Ok, ok.. Serious mode.. Where will I start?? hmm.. Let me think.. we are 5 in the family. My.. My father is.. Wait, do I really need to answer you question?"
"It's up to you. I'll respect your decision."
"Can I trust you this? I mean.. Do you really think you can accept me.. I mean you can still accept me as a person.. a.. after I tell you.."
"It's up to you on how will you judge me.."

"o... kay.. Take two! hehe..
When I was young, my dad was the head of the BTF company. He had favoritism between his sons. He likes our sibling Jonah, the oldest who died 2 years ago because of leukemia. From that time, only my mother alone who defends ma and Paolo against my father's abusive behavior. Before, I was asking, Why can't my father accept me and my younger brother. Until one night came, my mother and father were fighting inside their room. I and Paolo listened to them and we just found out that Johna's father is different to mine and Paolo's. I got really mad. I went out of our house and got drunk. Then I... I..." Edward said, and silence followed.

"You... uhh.. suspense?? hehe!"
 "Haha! Not really"
"Go on.." Alice said, smiled and picked up the rock beside her and threw it on the pond.
"I had a.. a.. sexual intercourse with different girls. Few month have passed, I reached 17, I tried to stood up and went to my step father's work. I had a deal with him. If he let me get my brother, I and Paolo would never step on his territory. Paolo felt a new hope. We stayed at Mark's apartment. Heh! He's my high school classmate. I and Paolo went through gigs. I sing and both of us plays the guitar. I and Mark made a deal. We will pay 50/50 for the rent. More months passed by, Mark presented himself as a bassist and so I though about having a band. Daniel, one of our close schoolmate became the second vocalist and Matthew became the drummer."

"Ohh.. Wait is Matthew you're schoolmate?"
"Nope. He was recommended to us by one of our directors in the studio."
"Ohhh.. Well, at least, you're a different person now... A.. a better one.." Alice said, smiling on the dark sky.
"Eh?"
"Nothing!" Alice said and winked to Edward.
"Let's go back home?" Edward asked.
"Sure! C'mon!" Alice replied.

They stood up and walked back home with Edward spotting Alice's tickling points.

"Hey! What the hek are you doing! Stop it! Haha!"
"Don't like!"
"Errrrrr!!!"

_______________________________________________________

[hoshi's 1st storia] "With You" (Chapters 1 - 4)

 Before anything else..
actually, I should post this one next week but since, it'll be exam week, I posted it now.. xD enjoy! :P

_______________________________________________________

Chapter 1 : "Why?"

    Once,there was a girl named "Mia". Both of her parents died from a land slide. She was the only survivor from the disaster for a reason that she is the only one who ran fast and thought of a good strategy to save herself. After the natural phenomena, she was the only person at the top of the hill. She started crying out for her parents. A woman passed by and saw Mia. Mira (the woman) came near and had pity on her.

"What's your name and how old are you, sweetie?" asked Mira.

"Mia. I'm already 11 years old." Mia answered.

"Wow. Nice name! Almost sounded like mine. Come here, sweetie. Don't cry.. Enough of that." Says Mira, hugging Mia.

"Thanks Ma'am! " Mia replied.

Mira reported the incident and took Mia home. While waiting for the police report, Mira, researching for how to be a good mother. She really don't know what to do that time. On the other hand,Mia, lying on the bed, holding a rosary and was praying that her parents would be fine. Seeking for their love, She came near to Mira, hugged her, shaking and was very cold. 3 days have passed, her parents' body was found, lifeless. Her father was already dead and her mother was dead on arrival. Mia heard the news and got very sad. She screamed so loud and tears on her eyes started on dripping. Night came, and she was very tired crying the whole day. Mira then just stayed beside Mia, and gave all her best to support her.

Few more days have passed, Mia, always being very quiet, sitting somewhere or lying on the grass of fields, look on the sky and think about her parents. Mira always hear her singing one same song everyday. Mia said, it was the song that was last composed by her mother before she died. As time goes by, Mia realized that she was taking the situation very emotionally so then, she stood up wore a smile, sang a happy song and danced. She thanked Mira for her support. Mira just laughed so hardly.

"Why? do I look like a fool?" Mia asked.
"Wuhh.. I don't think so! just.. VERY MUCH! " Mira winked at Mia.
"errr.. c'mon!! wooh!!! Party-party!! Hahaha!!" Mia shouted.

Mira was a little surprised. But then, she smiled so big, seeing Mia very happy.

"Once again, thank you sooooo much!!" Mia said and kissed Mira's cheeks.

Happiness grew inside the house. Time goes by, Mia got very comfortable talking to Mira. Finally, Mia let Mira adopt her and both decided to change Mia's name to "Alice".

_______________________________________________________

Chapter 2 : Mira's Agony

4 years have passed, Alice had a possibility that she would not continue her studies because Mia lost her job. The candy factory that she's working with was bankrupted and wasn't able to restore and continue the business. Mira, for a meanwhile, sold her jewelries that was given to her by her husband who passed away 5 years ago, a year after the wedding. While gathering the remaining jewelries, Alice sat beside her..

"Ma?" Alice said, calling Mira.
"Yes my dear?"
"uhh... Nothing?" Alice replied and hugged Mira.

"You know what...
When I was 19 years old, Neil, my husband started to woo me infront of my mother. We always spend time together. My mom, avoiding my dad to see us together really supported our relationship. Neil always call me at my phone whenever he's ready for our date. I kiss my mother a goodbye and gives me back a good luck kiss. Neil and I run through fields, holding each other's hand, and will intentionally, fall on the ground. 5 years have passed, our relationship grew stronger, he proposed infront of my siblings and my parents. My dad was first, disagree-ing but then, Neil didn't gave up and finally, he got my father's heart. My dad agreed and gave his blessing to me and Neil. The most awaited event came and everyone is ready. The wedding was successful and the night was nice. Until Neil and I had our first baby. We named her Anna. The time came that he was driving with my daughter without knowing that the breaks were dis-functional. That night, I waited for them the whole time. The phone rang. The police called me and told me the bad news. The car fell off from the bridge to the bay below it. My husband cannot open the doors anymore. They were stucked inside. The water continued to flow inside until both of them got drowned." Mira told Alice with teary eyes.

"That's.. so... So sad.. What the.. so.. How old is Anna should be now?" asked Alice, very speechless and with a sadness on her face.
"4 years old. I just wish you and Anna were together now. If ever she's still alive until now, I think, you would be as close as real sisters." Mira said, wiping her tears away from her eyes and smiled to Alice.

Alice smiled back. Mira continued to pack up the jewelries. Monday in the morning, Alice get ready for her school and decided to be a working student. Mira disagreed but Alice really wanted to. Fortunately to Alice, she found a small cafe, hiring a waitress. She applied after class and was approved after the 3rd day. Finally, she would now have an enough money to continue her studies. She manages her time well and sometimes, she even study while waiting for costumers to attend to.
_______________________________________________________

 Chapter 3 : An Unexpected Incident

Thursday and it was dismissal time, walking on the road to go back home, Alice passed by an open space with a group of guys and thieves were having a conversation. The thieves,  as people can always see, wearing all black.  Alice, while seeing a gun got very nervous. She hid behind a big garbage can, shaking and was thinking a good plan on how to terminate those bad thieves. She secretly called the police station and gave the location address as silently as she could. She hanged up the phone and get some big stones. She hid back again. She threw stone on the hand of the thief who was holding the gun and hid back again so immediately. That was a good shot. The leader of the thieves then, accidentally dropped down the gun. The others, looked so stupid that the couldn't figure out on where did the stone came from. The time that no one of them stared at Alice's angle, she next, threw a bigger stone to strike the leader's nape to make him unconscious. Again, that was a good shot but this time, the others detected her. She threw on the trash bin's lid to one of the members of the thieves who is about to pick up the gun on the floor. For the ones who are about to attack her, she threw the contents of the trash bin together with the bin itself. Hearing the police car siren, Alice and the 5 innocent boys got very relieved. The thieves tried to escape and just leave the leader there but it was already too late. The cops brought them to jail and they followed to report what happened.

After everything that happened, the evening became once again, peaceful. Alice started to walk back home. One of the innocent guys come near to Alice. They bowed down and said, "Thank you very much! Without you, we won't be saved. We almost die a while ago. Thank you, once again!". The others did the same.

"Hehe.. You're welcome! Ok, have a good night! God bless you!" Alice replied.
"Hey!" Edward, one of them, called to Alice.
"Yes?" Alice answered back with confusion.
"What's your name?"
"Alice."
"One more! uhh.. We, I and my friends are new here in the town. We have no idea about the place here. We are lost. Do you know any nearest  apartment / inn where we can stay for a while and have a rest? We're really tired." Edward said.
"The nearest is far. It is located on the next  2 cities. But.. wait.." Alice said, getting her phone.

She can't find it then realized that she left it on the ground beside where the trash bin is located. Lucky, it's still there. She called Mira. "Ma, can I let my friends stay for a while in our house?  I'll explain later. A very long story." she said. Because of trust, Mira agreed. "Thanks, Ma!" Alice said in reply.

"Or.. Stay in our house." Alice continued to Edward.
"What!? In your house!? That's too much!"
"Hehe! Don't worry! It's just fine! "
"What now?" Edward said, asking his friends.
"I don't know. Haha!" Daniel, one of the members said.
"tss.. Let's go!" Alice said, started to walk, taking the route to her home.
"Are you sure!?" Mark, the other one said.

Alice didn't reply back. the guys shyly followed.

"I'm home!" Alice shouted.
"Ma, here are my friends." she continued.
"Good evening ma'am!" the group greeted to Mira, bowing their heads.
"Same to you. Can you give me your names?" Mira asked.
"Edward." the boy with a black curly hair and a hat said.
"Daniel." the boy with a blond short hair.
"Paolo." the boy with a short, gray hair with braces on his mouth said.
"Mark." the chubby boy with a red hair said.
"Matthew." the man with a mohawk hair said.
"There are rooms at the left side. You can choose your rooms there. But there's only two so group yourselves. The two rooms at the right side is mine and Mi~ .. I mean, Alice's, ok? come here in the dining table. I cooked something to eat." Mira said, inviting the boys.

That evening, they quietly munched their dinner.
_______________________________________________________

Chapter 4 : Settling Down

8PM, after dinner..

"Bye, Ma!" Alice said and kissed Mira on cheeks.
"For work?" asked, Mira.
"Yup!"
"You are a working studant!? Wait. But what time do you sleep!?" Edward ask, very surprised.
"5pm - 7:30pm. Then 1 hr after work. Sorry, gotta go! Talk to 'ye if ever there's a time!" Alice said, wearing her shoes.
"Take care, my dear!" Mira shouted.
"Sure thing!" Alice shouted back.

The boys settled down their bags in the room. They planned about who will be in the room #1 and who will be in the other. It was a cold night. As a rest, after they've fixed their  things, they sat on the sofa near the chimney. They saw there, Mira, drinking a cup of hot tea.

"Excuse me, ma'am. Why is she the one working? and.. her father?" asked Matthew.
"Her parents are gone. They died  from a land slide. I found her at the top of the hill and adopted her. She works because she wanted to so that she can continue her studies. I lost my job just last week." Mira replied.
"One reason why she's a little quiet all the time?" Mark said.
"Can be.. And actually, she's a shy type of girl. As you can observe, she's talkative when I'm the one she's talking with. Don't worry. If you really get to know her, she'll be comfortable with you. And if that happened, she'll be later, very talkative." Mira said.

Mira stood up, went to her bed to sleep. 30 mins passed, the boys did the same...

3:00 AM, Alice was back home. Everyone were still sleeping. She immediately, took a bath and brushed her teeth. By the time she opened the refrigerator, Edward felt that there was someone sneaking at the kitchen so he woke up and checked what's in there. He walked there and when he saw its just Alice, he became relieved.

"Hey!" Edward called Alice.
"Eh? Still.. awake? hehe!" Alice replied.
"I felt that someone is in here so i checked it out.. By the way, how old are you?"
"15 y/o. Third year high school."
"FIFTEEN!? I.. can't believe! It's so young for you to work!"
"That's life. Haha! And you? Are you still studying? You look like a teenage boy."
"18 y/o. I stop on studying college because I don't have enough enough money to continue my studies. and now that we are a band, this will be an opportunity for me to save money for my continuation."
"Ohh.. what should be you're course by now? and.. you and the guys are a band!? COOL!!"
"Yes, for already 2 years. Course? Chemical engineering."
"Wow! very nice! What's the name of your band?"
"Soul Freedom."
"Nice one! I wanna hear some of your songs, won't you mind?"
"Haha! sure! I'll get my guitar."
"I'll wait for you outside."

Alice went outside and sat on a bench stone, waiting for Edward. He, on the other hand, get his guitar in the room. He also get his clear book, full of song lyrics. He followed Alice outside and sat beside her. Looking at Alice's behavior and personality, He chose to sang a slow, sweet song.

"A Song of the Sun? Nice title and song! you're so cool! I like your voice! Very much! No kidding! Sweet!" Alice said with a big smile on her face.
"Thank you! Wait. I remember what you've said. You sleep 1hr after your work. You should be sleeping again by now, don't you?" Edward said with a deep concern.
" Ah! Yes. We'll continue tomorrow, can we?" Alice said.
"It's already tomorrow. Haha! Okay! So... Sweet.... Dreams??" Edward shyly said.
"Haha! Yeah, you're right. Thank you! Same to you, in continuing your sleep." Alice gently smiled.

_______________________________________________________

[hoshi's 1st storia] "With You" (an Introduction)

Here's the story i made.. the very 1st one.. I already finished this before but I still need to translate and fix it to a more detailed one.. my inspiration in writing this one was using the names of my favorite singers and song writers who somewhat.. uhh... influenced my life.. I can't let the names be what it be so I also changed the character names.. I warn you, i'm not that good in speaking in english so.. don't expect that the grammar would be perfect.. :) And also, It is not professionally made or written.


The right names were the one written originally (the name of  my fave singer / band member) on my original copy while the names on the left side were the one used in here.. 

Extra - Mia / Alice

Extra 2 - Mira

Extra 3 - Luna

Kohshi - Edward

Keigo - Daniel

Take - Paolo

Got's - Mark

Iwasaki - Matthew

Kajiura - Patricia

Wakana - Jessica

Keiko - Stephanie

Hikaru - Jeanne

LOL!! i think some of the readers would know where did those original names came from.. xDD 



genre: romance, action, drama, and music..


Just a very short summary:

There was a girl named Mia who lost her parents from a land slide. She was adopted by Mira who is a widow and changed her name as Alice. Alice saved a band named "Soul Freedom" from the thieves who attacked them and met Edward, the lead singer as her love interest. 




Peace! that's all I can say for now.. It's up to you if you will follow the story.. :P thanks.. xD